May 5, 2009

Redeem(ed)

Eyes are tired
Feet are cold
Heart is sore
Feel so old

Such desire
to have sleep
But instead
only weep

Was a day
near half wasted
Not the worst
Ever tasted

A little longer
Then flickers, gone
A couple minutes
Redeem the wrong

Heart and face
Can wear a smile
Share my joy
A little while

3 comments:

Kay said...

I love this poem so much! The lines are just awesome and it even rhymes!!

Hayley said...

: )

[which means, I read this, I related to this, I liked this. <3]

Kaitlyn said...

Ah, Becka, I love it...and as Kris said, it even rhymed!